is this a good review? well, i think you might want to drop a few hints about the resolution, without giving too much away. your first sentence is kind of redundant, so try to improve things like that, as well as punctuation and capitalization errors. sometimes, it seems like you're jumping from one thing to another with explaining, so you might want to further explain some things. and, usually in a book review, you put your opinion at the end. you can look at actual book reviews for examples.
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